For my revised revision essay, I'd say the main focal point is to make people think differently about abortion and its impacts. I want to make the argument less direct and more personal in order to bolster the argument, while watering down its harshness. My mission statement is: Give respect to the unborn. My first copy of the revision essay was lacking the personal piece so my goal is to put that personal aspect back into the writing while still making my main argument clear.
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